Loving You

6 Jun

My love for you is as full as a blank page.

My love for you was true

My love now count’s as much as the empty coke can crushed beneath my shoe

My love for you was true

My love for you is real as a fairytale.

My love for you is as lovely as a thorn on a rose.

My love now count’s as much as the empty coke can crushed beneath my shoe

My love for you was true

My love for you is as soft as a broken bottle

My love for you is as warm as an Alaskan Storm

My love know count’s as much as the empty coke can crushed beneath my shoe

My love for you was true

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5 Responses to “Loving You”

  1. Lettie June 6, 2010 at 2:25 pm #

    I really, really like this one. Like, really-really.

    • breanacarrier June 8, 2010 at 7:58 pm #

      Thank you 🙂 It used to be one of my favorites because it wasn’t really serious. It had a slight amount of comedy to it.

  2. dancingfreak June 7, 2010 at 3:46 am #

    Your poem portrays your love amazingly

    anyone will think you’ve had a major heart break.

    love this poem ^–^

  3. lovingmotherof1 June 10, 2010 at 7:53 am #

    I can relate to this poem. I loved it and I love your style.

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