25 Jun

little girl sits still at the corner of her bed.

waiting for the monsters to go away.

she wakes up from this dream called life.

troubled to wits end.

she wishes makebelieve was reality.

so she could be brave enough to fight her demons.

but sadly storybooks are just dreams.

and she is in reality.


7 Responses to “Untitled”

  1. curtisbell June 25, 2010 at 11:48 am #

    Humans are monsters in real life. Truth is scarier than fiction.

  2. Harshika June 25, 2010 at 12:28 pm #

    aww…cute …. It’s too bad dreams can never become reality 😦

  3. Joe Allen June 26, 2010 at 12:08 am #

    all pain has an equal contrast, if dreams are bad and good then life though tourcher sometimes can be closer to perfection than we can dream of. hard work is the void in life filled by the instantaneous reality of dreams, in sleep we cant decide anything in life we can work to have joy prevail over pain

    • jensmile June 26, 2010 at 8:08 am #

      i like that! Just saw you posted about my blog:
      I”m having a hard time navigating your blog jensmile.

      What does this mean? Sorry, new to blogging altogether!

      • breanacarrier June 26, 2010 at 8:38 pm #

        like there aren’t any pages or links. it’s not too organized yet but it may be because you don’t have many posts up yet. you’ll catch on.

  4. markssong June 26, 2010 at 3:09 pm #

    I see this beautiful rose on your wallpaper, but I don’t see any thorns. The thorns seem to appear in your writing.
    I’d like to see some of your roses. Trust me, you would feel better writing about them. People like roses rather
    than thorns. The thorns only make you bleed, while roses
    have a fragrance, a softness and a beauty that your eyes
    are drawn to, over and over. Just choose to be a rose.

    • breanacarrier June 26, 2010 at 8:37 pm #

      There are happy moments. I just felt that this was the write time to post some of the darker stuff. Get it out of the way. These poems were written two years ago. Trust me my life is much happier now. 🙂 thanks

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