Can’t Help But Wonder

27 Jun

Anticipation & Trepidation.

Building on crescendo.

Just once glance and just one look

Was all it took

to send my heart beating into a frenzy

Or limits of amicability is settled upon

And the worries of that which plague others pass us by.

But yet still

I can’t help but wonder

what if minds were to change.

I can’t help but wonder

What if we were to cast aside our restrictions

And let affection become more.

I can’t help but wonder.

What would happen?

If instead something would become

What was not intended to become.

Would that be great or Would that be horrific

One could only wonder.


4 Responses to “Can’t Help But Wonder”

  1. Corey Williams June 28, 2010 at 10:32 pm #

    Good o stuff there.

  2. jensmile June 29, 2010 at 3:36 pm #

    When I saw your topic I thought we had the same sort of site, seeing as how I also posted a Shakespearean sonnet on my blog last Sunday. This is totally different but I like it. Just curious: why do you class it as a sonnet? Kind of deviates from the structure but happy to be corrected!

  3. jensmile June 29, 2010 at 3:37 pm #

    oops sorry, just went back and it wasn’t you who initially posted! oops! i live this anyway!

  4. Abby July 5, 2010 at 9:56 pm #

    Sounds very lyrical. Found your blog via the crit section of Absolute Write.

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