Untitled (2)

29 Jan


There is so much still that I want to say to you.
The years have passed
And the feel of your skin
And the warmth of your breath hesitant upon my lips
Have faded from memory
The sound of your voice no longer echoes in my ears.
The light of your eyes I cannot recollect.
The shadow you once cast upon the door frame left with you.
I wonder if I made the right choice when I told you to go.
At least my heart is still whole.


4 Responses to “Untitled (2)”

  1. Johnny Giles February 5, 2011 at 1:49 pm #

    Really awesome poem! I love poetry with such depth!


  2. sajeev kumar February 5, 2011 at 11:16 pm #

    nice poetry.

  3. wjspeakes February 7, 2011 at 2:49 pm #

    Not bad. I would break it up a little more for effect, but do what feels right. Poetry comes out best when it comes from your heart not your head.

  4. redroom10 March 4, 2011 at 1:56 pm #

    Hold the memory but move on..everything for a reason 🙂
    Nice write.

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