23 Jul

I hate the truth

Of I’ll always be me

And you will be you

That I’ll never be yours

Nor you mine

Forever and ever

Forever all time

And though it’s a fact

That it’s you I’ll always lack

My love for you will

Write a thousand verses

I love you


2 Responses to “Realistic”

  1. mstevensson July 24, 2010 at 9:29 pm #

    This poem is very powerful. I really like the flow, how it goes between smooth and choppy, feels like the emotions that go with the words.

  2. monarc7 July 25, 2010 at 3:31 am #

    Perhaps, in my being me, there’s a you there so you’ll always be in my me, being mine. Nice one, makes me wonder about how ‘let me be me’ can hurt love.

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